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The Dare

Tue Jun 3, 2008, 12:30 PM
  • Mood: Hysterical
  • Listening to: Music
  • Reading: -.- National Geographics
  • Watching: Animal Planet
  • Playing: A game
  • Eating: Nothing though I might need to
  • Drinking: Water
When she found out
She wanted to unwind and shout
But her instinct told her better
Sitting on the problem made her upsetter
Maybe she wasnt ment to hear it
She doesnt want to believe it
She went to him and ask
"So this was the task?"

She left him in confusion
With a fake conclusion
She just leaves for a bit
Then he realizes that he didi it
With a purpose of explaining
His friends were just complaining
He just compleated a bet
But fell in love with a loser "pet,"

At first the joke was all fun
Until she became his sun
He was her full moon
That took away the gloom
He tried to find her so he could explain
He just wished his friends wouldnt complain
His love for her was strong
As his friends tried to make it all wrong

He just wanted to hold her for a time
As he wished his friends would turn into mimes
He never ment for that joke to go this far
He could not live to see her in such sar
He kept looking till the clock struck three
As he fell up against a tree
She was at home with an almost cut wrist
As she thought'how could he do this'

She picked up the phone and dialed his number
She let it ring as he thought what a bumber
His phone rang and he answered with a hello
It was his life on her home telephone
She told him that she loved him
But with his friends that seemed to love him made him more dim
She told him that she had to go with a sob
She didnt know she made his heart throb

He told her he'll be right there
And that it was a stupid dare
He hung up the phone and ran to her house
When he got there he found it as silent as a mouse
He banged on the door
As he saw her lying on the floor
He wnet to the back
And hit the door with a smack

He broke the glass and went in
As he prayed to god for the sin
He found her lying in a pool of blood
That looked like it was a flood
He saw her face sticken with tears
As his soul filled up with fears
He grabed the knife
And almost took his life

When he closed his eyes
He thought'why did she have to die?'
He thought about all his friends
That drove him to his end
He slid the knife across his wrist
As he thought why they made him do this
He fell to the floor next to her
As he murmered noe ill be with u for sure

The blade had both blood types
As the angels sang with the windpipes
When they were lowered into the ground
Only two stood around
Thier two dearest friends will see them tomorrow
When it will bring another sorrow

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  • Current Residence: BFE.
  • deviantWEAR sizing preference: Say wha?
  • Print preference: Say wha??
  • Interests: Music, drawing, reading, art, volcanoes, dancing, singing, being demented, and stalking your mom.
  • Favourite movie: Stalker on the Loose
  • Favourite band or musician: Too many to count.
  • Favourite genre of music: Celtic
  • Favourite artist: Your Mom's Ass.
  • Favourite poet or writer: Myself.
  • Favourite photographer: Nobody.
  • Favourite style of art: Anime/Manga
  • Operating System: Windows XP
  • MP3 player of choice: GPX
  • Shell of choice: Sea shell?
  • Wallpaper of choice: Japanese themed.
  • Skin of choice: My own... duh.
  • Favourite game: Too many to count.
  • Favourite gaming platform: Nintendo DS
  • Favourite cartoon character: Sesshomaru, Gaara, and Orochimaru
  • Personal Quote: "When your eyes exceed the capacity of your head, there's something wrong with you."
  • Tools of the Trade: Spikey things.

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:iconbloodyrains:
Thank you for all of the faves!

Just commenting, but maybe you should take down the artworks that aren't yours... People in DeviantArt don't like it when people use art that isn't their own.

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If life gives you lemons squirt them in your enemy's eyes and run like hell!
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FOLLOW THE INSTRUCTIONS -
DO NOT CHEAT
OR IT WON\'T WORK AND
YOU WILL WISH YOU HADN`T.

TAKE 3 MINUTES
TRY THIS - IT WILL FREAK YOU OUT.

THE PERSON WHO SENT THIS TO ME SAID
HER WISH CAME TRUE 10 MINUTES AFTER SHE FORWARDED THE EMAIL

NO CHEATING !!!!









THIS GAME HAS A FUNNY / CREEPY OUTCOME.

DO NOT READ AHEAD, JUST DO IT.

IT TAKES ABOUT 3 MINUTES - WORTH A TRY

1st. Get PEN and PAPER

2nd. WHEN CHOOSING NAMES, MAKE SURE THEY ARE REAL PEOPLE THAT YOU ACTUALLY KNOW

3rd. GO WITH YOUR FIRST INSTINCTS !!!!! Very important for good results.

4th. SCROLL DOWN

ONE LINE AT THE TIME
DON`T READ AHEAD
otherwise
YOU WILL RUIN THE FUN.









1. On a blank sheet of paper, WRITE NUMBERS 1 through 11 in a COLUMN on the LEFT.












2. BESIDE the NUMBERS 1 & 2 ,

WRITE DOWN ANY
2 NUMBERS YOU WANT..

DO YOU HAVE A FAVORITE NUMBER?














3. BESIDE the NUMBERS 3 & 7 ,

WRITE DOWN THE NAMES OF TWO MEMBERS
OF THE OPPOSITE SEX.











CAUTION: DO NOT LOOK AHEAD or IT WILL NOT TURN OUT RIGHT














4. WRITE ANYONES NAME

(like FRIENDS or FAMILY...)
next to 4, 5, & 6 .













DON`T CHEAT OR YOU`LL BE UPSET THAT YOU DID













5. WRITE down FOUR SONG TITLES in 8, 9, 10, & 11
















6. Finally,

MAKE A WISH

















ARE YOU READY?
HERE IS THE

KEY TO THE GAME


1. THE NUMBER of PEOPLE YOU MUST TELL ABOUT THIS GAME is found in

SPACE 2





2. THE PERSON IN SPACE

3 IS THE ONE YOU LOVE






3. THE PERSON YOU LIKE but your relationship CANNOT WORK is in

SPACE 7






4. YOU CARE MOST about the PERSON you put in

SPACE 4







5. THE PERSON YOU NAME IN NUMBER 5 IS THE ONE WHO

KNOWS YOU VERY WELL.







6. THE PERSON YOU NAMED IN 6 IS YOUR

LUCKY STAR







7. THE SONG IN 8 IS THE SONG THAT MATCHES WITH THE

PERSON IN NUMBER 3






8. THE TITLE IN 9 IS THE SONG FOR THE

PERSON IN 7







9. THE 10 TH SPACE IS THE SONG THAT TELLS YOU MOST ABOUT

YOUR MIND






10. AND 11 IS THE SONG TELLING HOW YOU

FEEL ABOUT LIFE






11. NUMBER 1 IS YOUR

LUCKY NUMBER

SEND THIS TO A MINIMUM OF
10 PEOPLE
WITHIN AN HOUR OF READING THIS.



IF YOU DO, YOUR WISH WILL COME TRUE.

IF YOU FAIL TO, IT WILL BECOME THE OPPOSITE

STRANGE HOW IT SEEMS TO WORK

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To righteously kill someone, you have to use only one shot. If it takes more than that, turn yourself in.

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:iconhotshot2234:
thanks for the watch
:icondatenshi-666:
No problem

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~Oh what a Tangled Web we weave!~

~The Rose waited to bleed for me to see, my true form is it's Thorn.~

-----Famous line from Bugs Bunny-----
Eh, what's up doc?

Eh, your mother rides a vaccum cleaner!
:iconbloodyrains:
Merry Christmas~

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Do me a favor: Cry yourself a river and then drown in it.
:iconbloodyrains:
Down, down do your thing~~ -sings-

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Do me a favor: Cry yourself a river and then drown in it.
:iconjoyouslydead:
Changed my name to Applesauce Jack (homeless guy). Check my page. :clap:

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Yoga is a myth. Beleive it!
:iconjoyouslydead:
MUWAHAHAHAHAHAH!! BOW BEFORE ME BITCHES!! or stand there look hungry... which ever one suits your needs.

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Ethiopia is a myth. Beleive it!
:iconbloodyrains:
Update more often. ;3

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Do me a favor: Cry yourself a river and then drown in it.
:iconbloodyrains:
OMG. I'm so tired 'cause of work. x3 See you there, ne? Anyway... I'mma draw you a super chibi, if you want one. xD

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Do me a favor: Cry yourself a river and then drown in it.

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